Hey Ting... and on Valentines Day too! Well, I don't mind telling you that this story made my eyes sparkle a bit! How romantic this is! But I have this advice. You've got lots of dialogue in your film - but I don't think you need any talking. I think you can do everything with looking and with the character's reacting to each other - lots of glances and smiles - I think it will be more tender and more cinematic like that. Trust me on this! Drop the dialogue - it will work!
In terms of design - I want you to really think about the principles of design as per Justin's classes - and also really think about how you might design the circus - so looking at seashells and coral etc to design your spaces and your stuff.
I wanted to share this film with you for inspiration in terms of mood and character design:
OGR 14/02/2019
ReplyDeleteHey Ting... and on Valentines Day too! Well, I don't mind telling you that this story made my eyes sparkle a bit! How romantic this is! But I have this advice. You've got lots of dialogue in your film - but I don't think you need any talking. I think you can do everything with looking and with the character's reacting to each other - lots of glances and smiles - I think it will be more tender and more cinematic like that. Trust me on this! Drop the dialogue - it will work!
In terms of design - I want you to really think about the principles of design as per Justin's classes - and also really think about how you might design the circus - so looking at seashells and coral etc to design your spaces and your stuff.
I wanted to share this film with you for inspiration in terms of mood and character design:
https://vimeo.com/174544848